Cups and Arms (Editing and Revision) by Kassie K.
https://prezi.com/939jnysowkqk27.10.2016 · Revising (The Big Picture) Add words and sentences (be descriptive, capture all ideas). Remove words and sentences (be concise). Move words and sentences (sentence fluency, organization). Substitute words and sentences (word choice, voice). Editing- CUPS. Revising- ARMS. Editing (Conventions) AKA The details.